rejected comic

alright, happy new year, folks. here's a comic that i made a while back. a friend of mine works for an online game magazine and wanted a comic to go along with his review of Fable 3. he wrote the joke, i changed the wording to make it funnier, and he had me change the drawing several times to make the girl "prettier" (apparently more hair = more pretty.) after several revisions i got this. his coworkers loved it, the higher ups - on the other hand - did not. i guess they are trying to appeal to an all-ages audience and we have to shield their fragile little minds from this awful sex thing. all the guns and killing and other such violence in video games is just fine though.

anyway, i'm posting this hear instead of the Gag Emporium rzielabs.com/bob because it's not completely my own work. credit for the joke and the art direction should go to William Haley.

for the record, i though the girl looked prettier before i gave her all the curly hair and was asked to make her face all thin.